Creature Of The Deep – Swim Quickly!!!!

Creature Of The Deep

 
Creature of the Deep

Photo courtesy of Simon Pierce, One Big Photo

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Using your senses is a great way to make your writing exciting!

Imagine you could hear what was happening in this picture. Which ‘sound’ words would describe what was happening? (eg. splash, gurgle…)

Imagine you could feel the water and the whale. What describing words would tell the reader what they both feel like?

Look carefully at the photograph and imagine you could zoom out. What might be happening just underneath the shark/beside the man/close to them in the water? Write or draw what you think!

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  One thought on “Creature Of The Deep – Swim Quickly!!!!

  1. James
    November 28, 2014 at 1:49 am

    I would here my arms splashing on the water as something below me and I hear my self gurgling from the water getting in my mouth and I am trying to get it out and I here a humming coming from the thing under me.

  2. Holly
    November 28, 2014 at 1:50 am

    Hi mrs Joyce,

    Imagine you could hear what was happening in this picture. Which ‘sound’ words would describe what was happening? (eg. splash, gurgle…)
    Splash bubble bubble and kind of under your voice screaming 😮
    I think I’d also hear heaps of turbulence a of the whale sharks tail moving the water making it harder to swim.
    Even though I know that the whale sharks are friendly and not harmful I’d still be pretty scared if I was that person because I never want to end up in something that bigs stomach 🙂 😮

  3. Lavender-May
    September 3, 2016 at 4:07 am

    Splash, as I look at the megestic plane ocean view! Huh, what’s that? Ahhhh, it’s a humongous whale?!?! Why, is this gigantic whale trying to eat me, well at least that’s what it looks like from my point of view. My, body, shakes with fear, I am seriously swimming for my life, maybe, that’s a bit dramatic, but still, what would you say if a whale looked at you, as if you were its lunch! My, heart is, raceing, and, my bones tremble, with fear! What, am I going to do, well for now I will just keep swimming and hope this large, creature, moves on and, closes it mouth to find out I am a friend not food.

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